it feels like a pink floyd album

i really like the different chapters, you clearly had a story in mind, and did your best to represent it with sounds.

things are constantly moving and it keeps it fresh, the use of silence is well done.

The kick felt a bit too loud, it buried the other instrument, perhaps making it slightly less loud, it would keep the emphase and intensity but i would hear the other instruments better.

Other than that keep up!

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Wow, what a step up from your previous.. uhh "test".

first of all, the percussions, lots of variety of sound, is coherent. it feels a bit off at some points, because it stop following the 4:4 at random moments. but in general its really good, percussion is your most recognisable strength, keep up

the melody at the begining is minimal, but the notes plays between your percussions, making some really satisfying rythm

you took the time of making some arpegios for the chord progression, really enhancing the quality of your work.

theres a rythm conflict with your melody and the percussion.

Im really happy to hear multiple instrument at different octaves, they complete eachother and breaks the monotonous melody curse your previous musics had.

this is by far a big step up.

note : keep up, you have a good base to work on.

Hello, its me.

I hope for you it was just a test.

I dont think I need to say where this melody is from. Its very slow paced and theres nothing adding details or movement to your music, its extremely monotonous.

The percussion is poorly designed since it doesnt add anything to the piece. Doesnt change at all, and has the exact same sound the whole time.

at the middle, i thought you were going to try for a beat drop or something, only to hear the exact same thing ive heard for the whole first half.

note : you barely even tried, cmon man, you gotta step up your game.